Shoddily Presented
The introductory menu I think was the best presented part of this. The rest was awful. Let me run it down.
What actual art was there was barely animated at all, and the real animation consisted of a whole load of raster images you collected and flash in front of my face in a random order. That's not animation, that's a slideshow.
The voice acting was quite possibly the worst I've heard in a long while. Stop slavering into the mic and learn some live audio techniques. It was more painful to listen to, especially coupled with the terrible overused sound effects and background music which was badly levelled.
A film this short shouldn't have 'acts'. 20 seconds of pictures does not constitute an 'act'.
~Rhyth~